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Millie feeling a little depressed because of loona comes across loonas sister, both of them chat which ends with them going into a magic shop in which millie hopes to get a item which allowes her to disguise as loona and make sure loona isnt having sex with her partner.
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What will Moxxie think?
you gotta give credit to moxie, he at least gave a little resistance to loona, millie just jumped right in
They're in fucking he'll who gives a fuck if they cheat
That's a good point actually. They may not be sinners who went to hell but they were born and raised there. Their culture is defined by sin so why tf do they care about monogamy
Just fuck Sol already pls🙏🏼🙏🏼
Hell yea can we get some sol porn
hell yeah brother
Fr
I mean loona is right but it still should've never happened in the first place
Yes, exactly this
i bet loona is gonna say that she manipulated moxxie into sex
You and mox need couples therapy or something.
I mean… she ain't wrong, Millie.
My disappointment in this comic shall be lessened if Sol is in this more
Sybau
:(((
Loona spitting facts on the last page
they need relationship counseling fr
I'm still worried for Moxxie on what will happen if Blitz finds out that he had railed Loona whom he considers like his own daughter
blitz should be fine with it since he views the whole business as a family. as the saying goes, "if you can't keep it in your pants, keep it in the family"
well i was wrong. blitz being angry was how i thought things would turn out in chapter 1, but he seemed so goofy and just surprised more than anything that i changed my opinion and expected him not to be pissed at moxxie
I mean, out of all bastards that live in hell moxxie is not a bad choice
Would be perfect if Moxxie stayed completely oblivious to the whole thing throughout the comic
Turns out he doesn't stay oblivious
Why the suddenly Futa rag?
Yeah now all y'all bitches fee stupid now huh. The plot hole is addressed. Now you look stupid on your high horse with your "oh but Millie cheated too this comic sucks" comments. If only y'all trusted in Jizoku's process. Jizoku is peak on my fuckin balls and cats
...no? Millie still DECIDED to cheat on her husband before finding out he cheated first, and then CONTINUED ON being mad at Loona for fucking Moxie even after finding out. Simply pointing out an issue in your story doesn't magically fill the plot hole. Addressing Millie being a hypocrite was THE BARE MINIMUM, not extra credit
Glaze
Yes, obviously, but this doesn't change the fact that now everyone in this story is a shitty person rather than just some select characters. It wasn't a plot hole, it was bad writing, because it's going to take major work to remedy the situation. It isn't unsalvageable, but this needs a lot of finesse to become good again
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