I like that this author is trying to add more legit writing into their comics, but I think their missing a few key pieces. Scenes like the one playing out now need to be built up more through showing, rather than explained through telling out of seemingly no where. This comic has been going on for a while so I assume it wasn't all planned out from the beginning, but that's my 2 cents on it.
May I say I disagree with you. This conversation is natural to happen, once both are in bed exgaging life experiences that made them be where they were on that moment. This scene, even if it's a bit of telling, is not an example of bad telling once the expectations of a natural bed talk like that is for the telling to be present. Also, adding my 2 cents here
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Wait wtf
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Wait this os not Minecraft manhunt
Wholesome ending, and I like it 😁 but come to think of it, how would grass and fire type fused together to make a baby 🤔
Scovillain
good ending
So is this done? Or what
I WANT MORE!!!
"patreon only content, do not redistrubute!"
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Sorry lili bro but this ain't worth paying the pateron fee a month for
Shhhhhhh
This story is too nice to masturbate
Ikr? Shit makes me wanna cry almost
the inceneroar looks funny lmfao
Wholsome as fuck
I like that this author is trying to add more legit writing into their comics, but I think their missing a few key pieces. Scenes like the one playing out now need to be built up more through showing, rather than explained through telling out of seemingly no where. This comic has been going on for a while so I assume it wasn't all planned out from the beginning, but that's my 2 cents on it.
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May I say I disagree with you. This conversation is natural to happen, once both are in bed exgaging life experiences that made them be where they were on that moment. This scene, even if it's a bit of telling, is not an example of bad telling once the expectations of a natural bed talk like that is for the telling to be present. Also, adding my 2 cents here
I love this
Cute not a furry tho but cute comic 7/10
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So typhlosion?
We don't talk about that
Wait did someone delete the I'm putting together a team Pokemon comic oh my god no way hahaha
No you can still find it in pokemon comics there just no updates for it yet
Very good 9/11
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