Prospectors’ Tribune #3 - Extra Chessy’s Valentine

Extra Chessy’s Valentine - YomsYels  

Requested by Captain Ahab E.G.O  



1. Art - 6/10  

A bit rough around the edges, but as far as translating the Papa Louie franchise art style into a porn comic, it does a pretty decent job. It kind of reminds me of Quaver, but better rendered. Lighting is on point, and facial expressions are really well done too. The way the internal monologues are drawn don’t stand out very much though and the line work gets a little unpolished in some spots but I’m just nitpicking really.  



2. Plot - 6/10  

Refreshingly simple, although it could probably use just a little more setup. I feel as though there’s some sort of history I’m supposed to know about, probably through other one offs the author has done. The dialogue’s awkward at points, but I think it’s more-so a symptom of translation than poor writing. The title is spelled “Chessy” three separate times. The story sticks to the Papa Louie lore pretty well - Roy even forgets to make an order for a customer.  



3. Appeal - 7/10  

The author’s art style really works well in terms of appeal. The lighting kicks into high gear once the action starts, and they somehow make Papa Louie characters look like they’re drowning in ecstasy. I was a bit thrown off when Roy started cranking his hog of his own accord after they finished grinding on each other, but it’s probably his first time so I’m not going to give him grief for it. Beyond that strange but quick moment, the author does everything else well enough. Interestingly, the last panel refers to the love interest as “him”, which might just technically make this the first gay porn comic uploaded to this side of Multporn. As Sonic the Hedgehog said, “My Fucking God! These bitches gay! Good for them! Good for them.”