I will always applaud a porn comic that creates real story elements. Gamainks has fantastic art and that is on full display here, but I can't help but think this is a bit basic so far. That said, all stories need to start somewhere, as do storytellers, so I applaud it nonetheless.
(OP speaking here) In terms of what I would recomend for changes, I would say give the antagonist a greater plan than "haha now you're my boy toy". If we're involving superpowers like this comic seems to be, corporate advancement and all the potential influence that comes with that feels like a grander goal worthy of the means used here. Perhaps flesh out the company as important somehow.
As the Commanding General of the NTR Army, I initially watched Pokemon porn and saw a "light nut," but then it got cornier, that fucking vanilla, simple, saccharine... And then that excuse for a drama. I didn't masturbate and went to an NTR manga.
~ Yuri Andropov, Brigadier General of the NTR Army, Eastern Front
woah I didn't expect an actual story, I mean yeah gamma's tend to have some basic plot but this seems wild, I massively regret hitting end on my keyboard to skip to the updates
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this is...actually pretty good. 9.5/10
The use of Tera Dark on the Rotom phone as a story element was genius!
I will always applaud a porn comic that creates real story elements. Gamainks has fantastic art and that is on full display here, but I can't help but think this is a bit basic so far. That said, all stories need to start somewhere, as do storytellers, so I applaud it nonetheless.
(OP speaking here) In terms of what I would recomend for changes, I would say give the antagonist a greater plan than "haha now you're my boy toy". If we're involving superpowers like this comic seems to be, corporate advancement and all the potential influence that comes with that feels like a grander goal worthy of the means used here. Perhaps flesh out the company as important somehow.
As the Commanding General of the NTR Army, I initially watched Pokemon porn and saw a "light nut," but then it got cornier, that fucking vanilla, simple, saccharine... And then that excuse for a drama. I didn't masturbate and went to an NTR manga.
~ Yuri Andropov, Brigadier General of the NTR Army, Eastern Front
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Hollow Knight Fan Here
you brought me back single-handedly, fuck yeah
Hollow Knight Fan Out
Nah, i'd say cut her throat, classic PON-PON-PATA-PON and that's all
Fuck i wasnt logged in
anyways don't let them tell their story, that's time for 'em to make a move, it's better cut their hands just to be careful
Fuck off, HEIL NTR!!!
woah I didn't expect an actual story, I mean yeah gamma's tend to have some basic plot but this seems wild, I massively regret hitting end on my keyboard to skip to the updates
FUCKING PEAK FICTION!
Why are so many porn comics suddenly having actual story and character depth? Did something happen to the community when I was trying to stay clean?
Idk but it's better with story.
Just be happy about it!
This is a good thing
skipped the porn for the story
HOLY FUCKING PEAK I WANTED TO JERK OFF NOT EXPIERIENCE AN EMOTIONAL STORY
Damn I thought I was just gonna beat my meat. Look at this masterpiece
Page 40 reminds of that Ariana and Peter griffin image
It's good albeit a bit cliche, the couple is cute though. over all solid 8/10
Too much reading so I left.
Me too 😒
Far to much lore and not enough sex
You too fag also WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM WITH RAPE AND LOLI
'Grandma's dead, she won't complain now when I pound"
Guess the double entendre and I'll answer your question.
hey ova i do belive this is a wombo combo ragebait